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Witches Surprise

Witches fly on their broomsticks so very rough Flying past the full moon that is bright tonight Over the haunted house that’s daunted and tough Where a great jack-o-lantern lies bringing fright Lit to dishearten those who look on its soul Making life harder, letting tears take their toll Witch swiftly swoops down cackling with gloomy glee Taking all by surprise, her they didn’t see Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/31/2014 4:06:00 PM
Well, I thought too the last I read was my favorite, but alas and boo-hoo this one tops the charts of spookville !! Excellent ambiance !!
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Date: 10/28/2014 11:03:00 AM
Of all your Halloween poems... this is my favorite. Love the ending.
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Date: 10/26/2014 8:27:00 AM
love how you drew this russell beautiful pen
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:23:00 PM
You really could scare me, my dearest friend, Russell, if you didn't write so delightfully! Fantastic!
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:25:00 AM
I think I'll stay inside where it is safe *lol*
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:46:00 AM
Another spooky one !!! You are on a roll !!! Wearing my witch repellent !!! Another delightful read !!!
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:32:00 AM
Your are back in full fright..Way to go..I hope those broooomsticks are sandied down really well for a splinter from one of them would do some real damage at those high rates of speed at which those witches fly...Sara
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Russell Sivey
Date: 10/25/2014 6:44:00 AM
I'll make sure the brooms are sanded down before their long flights on Halloween! Thanks Sara!
Date: 10/24/2014 11:06:00 PM
Wow! This is a very wonderful and splendid poem for Halloween my dear friend Russell. You write masterfully as always! I'm so delighted to see you back and read again from you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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