Witch

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Written on September 24, 2023

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Words fail to explain her
Without doubt, sinister
Wearisome, she’s dreaded
Washed in blackest shadows
Wearing death like a cape
Wrathful as hell’s fury
Wishing for Halloween

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 9:08:00 PM

You did really well with witch. Sure better than me. Congrats, Gina

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/28/2023 6:32:00 PM

Well done zpleiades poem, Regina. You set the mood well..congrats on your win! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 10:48:00 AM

So well done, Gina. Amazing, innovative, out of the ordinary images like a witch casting a spell! Love the last line. Congratulations, sweet friend! Blessings and hugs.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/27/2023 3:42:00 PM

Excellent, Gina! CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Terry Miller

Date: 9/27/2023 7:24:00 AM

Bewitching; congratulations

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:08:00 AM

Very nicely written Gina, Congrats on your win

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 1:54:00 AM

You say words fail to explain her, but you describe her very well here.. Great use of the letter W.. reminds me of someone i know... Good luck in the contest.