Wistful

Shades of dull titanium unwavering
illume~ A Wistful evanescence is she  
Her orbs light gifts us freely

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:48:00 AM

Dear Anaya, This is beautiful and so very celestial, and i see the picture, now , and i cant help but see through your words , so ethereal! Thank you for mentioning below you had me in your mind, very kind and thoughtful, beautiful use of the prompt! Appreciate the take! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 9:41:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed and for the placement in your contest. Yes! You were the inspiration behind it all, my musing, you light up even through all the shades of dull titanium, a metaphor of course which I saw in the art work, i thought is a fit and I still do proving what i've known over and again ~ Ty for being a sponsor, your are much appreciated!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great micro poem, Wistful :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 9:31:00 AM

Ty Anne!

JCB Brul

Date: 5/8/2025 1:00:00 AM

What a sublime poem! Congratulations!. Stay creative! ^___^ JCB

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/8/2025 9:31:00 AM

A nice surprise! Ty, JCB ,)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/7/2025 5:00:00 PM

Anaya, I suspect this is a reflection of you. Poets are often giving people....at least we hope we are. It's a pleasure to read something like this and imagine all the help available to those in need. Smiles!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/7/2025 5:07:00 PM

If I could spread such hope, a tool for peace and understanding, I'd fall short, just like the illusional fictious character I had in mind. We are only human after all. You are too kind~ ,)