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Wistful

Quote: "“I love you and that’s the beginning and end of everything.” — F. Scott Fitzgerald1.

As soon as I came home, 
She waited by the door, 
No inkling of when I'd roam, 
Love's footsteps yearning for more. 

Thoughts of love, they dance, unsure, 
Caged desires like a bird's sweet cries, 
She longed to break free, to procure, 
Yet deep love kept her ties. 

Now, no one's there, just the floor, 
I wait, doorbells silent chimes, 
In solitude, I explore, 
Echoes of love in these times. 

In the stillness of the night's embrace, 
I seek solace, finding grace. 
Memories dance, a bittersweet song, 
Echoes of love, once so strong. 

Alone I stand, yet not alone, 
For love's essence I've ever known. 
Though she may not be by my side, 
Her love in my heart will forever abide. 

Through the silence, whispers of love, 
Echoes from the heavens above. 
In each moment, I find my way, 
Guided by love's eternal ray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:59 AM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Wistful" again. Have a wonderful day.............
Greenhough Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:12 AM
A very sad poem. I'm sorry to read about the loss of a loved one. May you find peace.
Greenhough Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Sorry. It is sad if the poem is about a deceased wife. She had good fortune in being so highly regarded. I know nothing about Indian culture, but I am going to a seminar on Wednesday that explains some of it.
Narain Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Sorry. I did not convey it right. In Indian culture, it was common for wives to wait and greet their husbands at the door.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:38 AM
- Memories warm one's heart for a while...but, the longing will return...a beautiful sensitive poem, Jay - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 12:49 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Wistful" write. What a great/fun/cute picture. Have a blessed day/week writing away...........
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