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Wisp of Time

Slivers of moments caught in the memory jet stream Blowing gently the past, eddies of windswept emotions of elation Presently, sitting on a park bench, taking a breather after doing a bit of shopping Press the rewind ... play back memories of some good times in my mind As I watch the children play on the playground, watching the mothers watch their children while sitting down near to me I remember my daughter playing so innocently on the monkey bars, on the slide Swinging on the swings, diving in the sand pile Her smiling at me all the while A golden moment of happy times spent with my child Sitting on a park bench years later, this makes me smile at the memory of her smiling at me A wisp of time, gently moving through the memory clouds of my mind I sigh, as a little baby near me starts to cry, and her mother picks her up tenderly ... coos to her, which makes the baby smile And I smile too

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Date: 3/4/2017 9:36:00 AM
This is so nice Freddie. I enjoyed it. The care, the comfort, the nostalgia. Well done. :)
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Date: 3/3/2017 7:26:00 PM
Sounds mighty wistful, Freddie. Love you, man.
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