Wisp of the Chill

soft vanilla nights

      tasting pink strawberry tips...

             rainbow sprinkles pop



a wisp of the chill

         sweet melon sprigs twist and shout...

                   snow cones dance around!






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For contest: PD’s Neapolitan Ice-Cream 
Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 4:21 PM
A very tasty, colorful write. Lots of carbination in that brew. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 3:40 PM
sounds like a grand treat for the tongue and tummy Nette luv.. good luck in the contest with this amazing dessert ...
Sivey Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Now that's what I'm talking about...can I have some please? Great description of this wondrous treat, YUM!!
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Hey Nette a yummy write from you...enjoyed.Best wishes.
Scripca Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Yummy, dear Nette. I want some of this gelato :) Love, iols :) (I love my nickname...)
K. Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:05 PM
What a cute twist with the melon added there, nette :D yumm-- I think Arce has melon flavored ice cream? hugs :) wish you the best!
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Yummy delight, Nette. Best wishes for the Winners' List in PD's contest. Love, Anna
Falotico Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:28 AM
I like this one, now you have raised the bar high for PD contest.... well done... and thanks I checked out your soupmail and you are right.. thanks for the heads up.... hugs all day for you.. Michael
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Makes me want two scoops. Tony
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