Wish-I-Was-In-A-Better-Place

Wish i was in a better place.
To survive myself from this case.
I know it is just a phase.
Till I get God's grace.

I think I'm sounding ungrateful.
It's just that sometimes it gets painful.
I got to Thank God and stay faithful.
'Cause graceful days are coming peaceful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 10, 2016 at 2:20 AM
Yoni, nice to see this one again. PD
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July 4, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Yoni Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care **SKAT**
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July 29, 2014 at 12:29 AM
Yoni, You write from your heart and that makes your words just flow. Such a painful, yet beautiful poem. Keep them flowing.....Linda
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July 27, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Yoni, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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July 15, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Hi Yoni, this is such a deep, powerful write. Well done! Best wishes.
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July 15, 2014 at 1:10 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Yoni :) - I choose your first moving and fine written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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July 15, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Yoni. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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July 14, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Yoni, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 14, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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