Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"wishing Well"

Today I sit dream out loud....
Making wishes that are not found..
I'm drawing blanks from this wishing well...
Small coins tossed in but nothing to tell...
Maybe less then nine lives used...
Might be tattered but barely bruised...
This wishing well has not been kind...
Two wishes left and still no sign...
Tomorrow I wake and see my way...
Dreamed of purple sky's and glimmered rays...
Velvet walkways that lead to a colorful field...
Where spring is forever and love is for real...
My pillow turned as I tumble and wake to a bell....
And out side my window there sits the wishing well...

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Poet Destroyer A October 17, 2010 at 4:03 PM hello, Michael how are you, good I hope, you have a poem out there i can not get into. It does not have a title. LOL, how do I open it,,take care,..p.d.

Kristi Hayner September 24, 2010 at 6:35 AM Nice! Like this a lot, thank you for the positive comment on my poem today!

Nate D. September 23, 2010 at 10:40 PM A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan

Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2010 at 4:44 PM Hello, Michael I have really missed reading and commenting your poetry. I've been on line with the worse connection ever. Thanks for your lovely comments. And you know me! I have to catch up reading your newest poems. By the way Michael, I love your expression in the first line,,LOL,, I have dreamed out loud myself. Honestly I love this poem,, and every line. Adding this one to my favorites. Imagine that waking up to your dream. Enjoying and loving the reads,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire September 21, 2010 at 6:46 PM So often we toss those coins and make wishes, Michael. Perhaps you will still find that colorful field. These words seem to come for your heart and I'm wishing you everything you wish for yourself. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels September 21, 2010 at 4:38 AM Who knows maybe they will come through.. Just love the idea of velvet walkways, you painted a vivid picture here Michael. lv Wilma

Debbie Guzzi September 20, 2010 at 5:44 PM I like this! It is circular I love endless things and the well is always there to go to! Thanks for reding me! Hope you have time for a blog comment. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 20, 2010 at 2:14 PM Wonderful words and never give up on those wishes my White Knight.. they appear when u least expect it... enjoyed and u won't believe this but I have been thinking of a wishing well all day today.. how ironic is that luv..????