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Wishing Well

I toss my dreams into a wishing well To confide secrets only my heart could spell Of a fervent desire to find eternal bliss And childish hopes of Prince Charming's kiss

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James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2009 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/15/2009 7:29:00 PM

Andrea - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/15/2009 7:48:00 AM

A delightful poem .... so happy to see it here among the featured work this week! ~ Carrie

Bianca Reyes

Date: 9/15/2009 4:35:00 AM

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS ON MY WORK! :) I am very busy in school now and I really miss writing. All your words are encouraging. Come sembreak I will write again. This poem is my favorite. :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/15/2009 1:28:00 AM

Andrea, congrats on having your work featured...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/14/2009 3:22:00 PM

congratulations on a featured poem! nicely written

Date: 9/14/2009 12:12:00 PM

Youthful and lighthearted. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/14/2009 8:07:00 AM

This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2009 4:48:00 AM

Nicely done featured piece expressing the thoughts and hopes of so many ladies in waiting. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2009 3:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrea. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful poem Andrea, i hope you get your wish, James

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/23/2009 10:42:00 PM

Beautiful write! Truly well written! Jeremia

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 9:37:00 PM

Andrea, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2009 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Rob Alexander Mayoralgo

Date: 4/5/2009 5:46:00 AM

Hey there. Short and sweet, just like you. My personal favorite of your work. More Power. ~Rob Alexander

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 10/12/2008 12:06:00 PM

Hi Andrea, It's a great poem! Welcome to the world of poetry.Keep on writing, express what is inside of you. Ernie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/12/2008 8:35:00 AM

This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of the wishing well is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/10/2008 12:10:00 PM

Be careful, some Prince Charming's turn into frogs. I liked this one. Nicely written. God Bless. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/9/2008 5:00:00 AM

I think we all share that dream at one time. Beautiful write. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2008 6:02:00 PM

I hope you get your wish!!~ Blessings ~Carrie