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Wishing To Climb

There is one thing she truly desires A single thing that she wishes to claim And she couldn't be labeled a lier By saying without it, she'd waste away She's an intricate and vast mystery Whom no one's come close to understanding She is a fragile broken girl, you see Because her most vital piece is missing Without the special piece, she cannot thrive Now she tends to fall when she tries to climb Asking, "Why live this way; oh why, oh why?" When she sees a cliff, she hungers to dive If the vital piece cannot be found She'll make the mistake that can't be unwound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/2/2011 7:39:00 PM
a great and very creative sonnet you penned. enjoyed reading it and thank you for posting it.
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:07:00 PM
Very good sonnet..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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