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Wishing For Perfection

When I woke up I didn't expect to see My face is changed, this isn't really me I felt all around my nose and my cheeks Everything was perfect, no more critiques Then a smile grew on my face Which lead to the surprising outcome of disgrace All of my once-perfect teeth had somehow disappeared And now I have everything to fear Wishing for perfection is going to have consequence Now, looking at my smile, there is the evidence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/10/2016 9:52:00 PM
Angelika, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/8/2016 2:29:00 AM
Angelika Demers, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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