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Premiere Contest WinnerWishing and Waiting

Waiting for spring to arrive, winter, oh w i l l I survive! I want no snowflakes falling, oh, SPRING you are crawling. Outside the snowflakes are pretty wishing for blooms. Oh PITY! I want flowers to caress, wear a sweet summer dress; snow is my great stress, SPRING- come p l e a s e and impress. ___________________________ March 30, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Wishing and Waiting Copyright Protected, ID 19-1128-718-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 10 lines, 5 words Rhyme III sponsor, Lu Loo First Place
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Jayasankar Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:15 AM
This is another beauty that caught my eyes today dear Constance.. Adorable picture too... Hugs... ~ Ani
La France Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Ani, thanks for finding and reading this older poem of min and for the compliment, yes, the pic is adorable, peace _Constance
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:24 AM
Dear Heart, may you be filled with the blessings of SPring! Congrats and thank you for your participation in my contest :)-luloo
La France Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Lu, thank you so much for the contest inspiration and my great placement, so appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Great win!
La France Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Timothy, thank you so much ~
Daniel Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 11:18 PM
Beautiful poem, Dear Heart:) congratulations on your trophy win:)
La France Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Jo, thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
Gilmour Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Back to send you many congrats on your 1st place win Constance - I really love your poem! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Ann, thank you for the congrats and the love ~
May Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 8:05 PM
Congrats on your first place win DH
La France Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Joseph, thanks so much for the congrats ~
Moorman Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Constance, congratulations on a fabulous 1st place in Lu Loo's contest. It is an honor to share a placement in a premier contest with such wonderful artists as you, Andrea, Emile, Greg, etc. I'm thrilled to be in the same winning circle.
La France Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Curtis, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment !
Romios Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Love the picture and your piem Congratulations Panagiota
La France Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Panagiota, I love that pic too, thanks for the congratulations ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 1:32 PM
love love love this, AND the pic with it. I am so happy I got in top three with you!! congrats on your first place win.
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the nice comment and the congrats ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Hello Dear Heart, yes the Spring season takes so long to come. The cat looking out the window is cute. have a nice day my friend.
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Darlene, thanks for visiting, oh yes, waiting, waiting here in Canada for Spring, I love cats ~
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April 1, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Dear Heart, this poem is straight from the heart and beckons Spring to increase its pace and please arrive! Beautiful, Poetry hugs, Jenny.
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Jennifer, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful ~
Lindley Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 9:34 AM
A wonderfully creative longing for Spring and its bountiful gifts, is in this gem my friend. A golden tapestry of deep desire for winter's cold to yield to Spring's far more inspiring weather and finer days! A fav and an uplifting gem too..
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Robert, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and the fav ~
Romios Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Best wishes on this beautiful and heartfelt poem... PANAGIOTA
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Panagiota, thank you for dropping by my poem and for the beautiful ~
Gilmour Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:38 AM
This is delightful Constance a beautiful write and I do hope you will be able to wear your 'sweet summer dress' sooooon! Kindest thoughts Ann xx - what an adorable picture too...
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the delightful, silly me has my sun dresses ready and we still have snow outside !
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Beautifully done! I miss the seasons since I'm in Florida but I don't mis the snow!
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Ralph, thank you for the beautiful, yes, seasons are nice but the winter is just too looooong !
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March 30, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Not only is spring crawling, here, Constance, I think it has been cancelled. It is SNOWING here today, and snow is on the ground and sticking! Thank you for giving me a little hope.
La France Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting and the sweet comment, it is not snowing here today, nor is it Spring ~
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