Wishing

Seeing life pass them by swaying between sleep and death Hypnotised Anesthetised Paralysed Living on the margins of life Like a background actor Dumb Watching Wishing dreaming of becoming alive full hearts full stop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 9:24 AM
A powerful penning indeed. Succinct. xomo
Waves Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Thank you for your precious description, Maureen McGreavy.
Kiser Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 3:32 PM
One can indeed, wish their life away but, it's more fun do dive in and do. Powerfully penned.
Waves Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 1:23 PM
one should never give up.. thank you for the sincere words.
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