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Wishing

Seeing life pass them by swaying between sleep and death Hypnotised Anesthetised Paralysed Living on the margins of life Like a background actor Dumb Watching Wishing dreaming of becoming alive full hearts full stop

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Date: 2/8/2019 9:24:00 AM
A powerful penning indeed. Succinct. xomo
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dido ch
Date: 2/9/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you for your precious description, Maureen McGreavy.
Date: 2/6/2019 3:32:00 PM
One can indeed, wish their life away but, it's more fun do dive in and do. Powerfully penned.
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Date: 2/7/2019 1:23:00 PM
one should never give up.. thank you for the sincere words.