Wishful Dreams

night-time brings bliss, like sunsets kiss.
   serene sweet dreams in silken sheets,
   as tenderly two hearts entwine.
   together seems like paradise
   a burning flame of deep desire,
   unquenched until the morning light.
   today those fantasies will fade,
   wishes come true on wedding days.

  
   7/ 25/ 2015.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Congrats on your win!!A7
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August 3, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thankyou Robert, i very much appreciate your kindness. George.
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July 30, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Congrats on your win, George :)
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August 3, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Hello Laura, thanks for being so kind to me. I do appreciate your support. Cheers. George.
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Oh this is short and sweet, a lovely write of passion!
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August 3, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Hi Casarah, please accept my thanks for your most kind words on my poem. I very much appreciate them. My kindest regards to you. George.
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July 30, 2015 at 4:23 AM
ooh a passionate write George - many congrats - a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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August 3, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Hello Jan, this was unknown territory for me.i was very surprised to get any place in the contest at all.I'm so glad you liked it. Thankyou for your kind words and support. Cheers. George.
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July 30, 2015 at 3:46 AM
George, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**
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August 3, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Hello SKAT, i am so pleased to accept your congratulations. I do appreciate your kind comments too. Thankyou. George.
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July 30, 2015 at 1:13 AM
Congrats on your sweet win george! ~lee
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August 3, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Hi Lee, it's so very good of you to offer your congratulations to me. Thankyou so much, my regards to you. George
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July 30, 2015 at 12:55 AM
George, mighty romantic... A sweet win. PD
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August 3, 2015 at 8:15 AM
Thankyou LINDA, it's not my theme really, i was inspired after my granddaughters recent wedding. It seems a little was rubbed off on me. My regards to you for your kind comments. George.
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 12:16 AM
A nice romantic poem, George. It showed up twice in my contest list for some reason. So strange! (I hope another person had not used your poem also in the contest because I eliminated that second entry of it) Congrats on my winners' list.
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August 3, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Hello Andrea, thankyou so very much for your kindness. I think it may be some technical glitch that has plagued me recently. It is my poem for sure and i am very happy to be on your winners list. My most kindest regards to you. George.
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July 30, 2015 at 12:15 AM
Real passionate n shweet george, congrats on fine win!
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July 30, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Hi Upma, thankyou for such nice comments on my poem. This was a little out of my comfort zone, but after being entertained by Neil Diamond live,who is my favourite recording artist, i was inspired. My kindest regards to you. George.
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