Wishful

Wishful

on the green meadow
there was  a
a white lily
such beautiful
fresh
fragrant

silence in the deserted
befriended harassment
echo heart

“if 
I could bargain this fate
I’d buy  dragonfly wings
achieved my right of freedom” said lily

was flying over
red dragonfly
cheerfully whistling
hummed
beautiful melodies

“I'm an admirer of art
devotee every beauty
I don’t  deny
you're the real beauty”
what a feeling
embraced  by the prince of love
alluring lovers
present
drunken romance
dazzling the lover’s eyes

if 
I could bargain this fate
I’d  buy your charms” said dragonfly

Laughed and laughted
loudly
wise wind 
blew down the dragonfly
to hug lily

lily with dragonfly wings
require practises to fly
to treasure her freedom

while
dragonfly was simply enjoying
the beauty
fragrance
and love

wingless
without flying

whispered wise wind
I am the Inexhaustible story
every second together
wishful tones
sweet dreams

if I could bargain this fade
i’d transform  the blue sky
into thoughtful poetry

~(c)sukmawati komala~
08 April 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/8/2013 9:55:00 AM
Lily, dragonfly and wind. A lilting, colorful tune indeed. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:11:00 AM
This is lovely...everything flows beautiful and reminds me of humankind...wanting to be something else when we are beautiful as we are because God made us as He wanted us to be...just so dreamy.....
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:11:00 AM
This is another great poem of yours my dearest sista! I love every line of it and the transformation. Thanks for sharing again you r gems and your sweet congratulatory comments on my win. Have a great time/day! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:26:00 AM
this is truly amazing poetry, to my fav.. just wanted this to go on and on, the imagery, the imagination, the joy, it is all there.
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Date: 4/7/2013 10:58:00 PM
My dear - you already have transformed the sky with your poetry. Thanks for sharing your poems. they are beautiful........ Lucilla
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