Wishes On Balloons

As  promise of wish rides on sky

Hued dream-bubbles climb in her eyes--

Transforming smudged  night into joy!




For  Contest,  nette onclaud’s 3 BY 8 
Written by Norma Arana, Dec  30 2014
Visual 1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 11, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Norma,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..A joyous win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 10:32 PM
VEry nice idea with visual one. Congrats for your win.
Yvonne Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 12:50 PM
A wonderful poem, congratulations on your win.
Nance Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 3:55 PM
This was a great write on the prompt! Well Done!
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 2:07 PM
beautifully penned Norma many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 9:23 AM
You did a good Job Norma,congrats on the win...huggs
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 9:20 AM
dream bubbles; that got me, norma.. well done!.. thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats
Mehta Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Nicely done on the theme of the picture, congrats on the win, Norma
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January 7, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Love Norma. Congrats. rajat
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