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Wishes Don'T Make It

It's time to take a reality check Before we break each other's neck! The intentions were good when we started out, Only kind words, never a shout. As time went by learning each others ways Word changed from good to silent days. Days to weeks and weeks to years. Eyes full of joy turned to tears. Our intentions were good there's no denying, But we only caused saddness as we kept trying. What was so wrong with this choice we had made ? Time taken back, our choices we'd trade. I wish we could find the contentment we seek, But wishes don't make it, they just make us weak. Who would have guessed life would be like this ? We just wanted the kindness and goodness we'd missed.

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Date: 5/24/2021 1:06:00 PM
This hit me deep. In the beginning of any relationship or prospect I'm talking to it always starts out great. Then it just turns cold and heartbreaking. We always wish for the best. Sometimes it just doesn't workout like that. - Great Poem.
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Virginia Gelok
Date: 5/25/2021 7:51:00 AM
I feel like I can understand why you felt that. By your poems I sense you too have been through hell and back. I speak from experience and so wrote the poem. so often we are blinded by the moment! Thankyou for your comment and I will take time to read more of yours.

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