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Wishes

All my wishes I give to the sea. in a blue bottle for him and for me. They'll glide slowly on the waves on a bright moonlit night to a distant land far out of sight. They'll ebb and flow with the tide until they rest upon a sandy beach. A lonely wader will come by and find the blue bottle at his bare feet. Or he'll be sitting in a yellow chair and see it shining through the salty air. He'll read my wishes from the sea and put his own in the bottle that someday will travel back to me. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: Jan. 28, 2017 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 11/24/2017 1:50:00 PM
This poem is beautifully written Carole. I enjoyed to read this poem. I am still waiting for my wishes to come true.. I sensethat one day they will. Have q nice day my friend.
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/26/2017 5:01:00 PM
Merci Darlene! Life is a waiting game I think. I do sincerely hope your wishes come true. Just keep picturing them and be sure you wish only for what you or someone else needs. Sending you love and good thoughts. Carole Duet
Date: 2/1/2017 1:54:00 AM
I know I left a comment on this poem! It went like, This flows like the waves upon the ocean and gently lands upon our feet on the shore! Not exactly like that, but I did do a comment on this one, I remember that much! What is going on with the soup? Beautiful Ngetal!
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2017 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Budgie!!

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