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Wish You Back

While taking a walk I thought of the reasons And mistakes I have made I felt your hand in mine A cold wind blew I knew I was alone Tell me where you are Did your heart turn dark All I can do now Is wish you back Upon the next falling star While laying in bed Thoughts crossed my mind Of the nights with you The morning sun rose All my strength is lost My heart feels you near We can fix this mess But all I can do now Is wish you back Upon the next falling star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 12/21/2008 3:18:00 PM
'...upon the next falling star' is a lovely phrase... so good you used it twice! Another wistful piece, exquisitely expressed. Best wishes, Keith
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