Wish Upon the Stars

There was once a young girl,
Who wish upon the stars,
Looking so bright in the sky,
She dream and soar up high.

Opportunities knock in front of her,
She think, she decide, with a prayer,
Go on, walk alone and prove to everyone,
That no matter what, she will do her plan.

Roads are not as smooth as she goes,
But strong enough to dream and pursue,
Thinking of the wish she promise to herself,
And she asks God to give her more strength.

To be strong to face challenges in life,
And dedicate her wish to God above,
Now success is within her reach,
With her determination not to be rich,
But to help for those who are need.

A girl who once wish upon the stars,
Is now a woman of example and virtues ,
For she is the already the molders of the youth,
Wish granted and she is now contented,
For God is really good if you believe and have faith



9th Place Winner
Pd's "New Poem" Contest

That Young girl was.......me

9th Place Winner
For Nathan's "oOne of your Best" Contest
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July 7, 2013 at 10:42 AM
:-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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July 1, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Maria, , congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's contest. *SKAT*
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July 1, 2013 at 9:24 PM
congrats ' NATE
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February 26, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Maria, congrats on your win with this lovely poem! Love, Kim
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February 25, 2013 at 3:21 AM
A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Hi Maria, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA
Liwayway Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 11:47 PM
thanks Joseph :) you are a good writer/poet, I read some of your poems and i like it..congrats!!
May Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 4:39 PM
lovely write Mary...enjoyed...luv...Joseph
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Another excellent poem my friend and this poems is about you. Good luck for the contest.
Liwayway Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 5:49 PM
(^_^) thanks friend Nore...its about me ....God bless
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Another golden gem from you Mary - very well written and I love it...thank you my friend - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:22 AM
thanks Anne...I inspired to write a poem because of reading poems from great poet/writer like you...you are one of my favorite poet :) God bless!!
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