Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Rhyme

Wish Upon a Star Come True

...baby
                    butterflies
                 wiggling 
                 away
                  first 
                    instars
                       making 
                     MY DAY!

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Karen Da August 4, 2018 at 5:21 AM This reminds menof something special. I love it..

Anisha Dutta July 11, 2018 at 11:21 AM Butterfly free to fly leaving skin of caterpillar. Congrats to instars. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 11, 2018 at 2:22 PM Thank you Anisha! It's quite exciting ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison July 11, 2018 at 7:49 AM Nature lady... a privilege to call you friend!!! Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX Jack Ellison July 13, 2018 at 9:50 AM Atr you sure you're not written up in nature books??????? XOXOX Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 11, 2018 at 8:06 AM What is this! A visit from my Jack before I visit you!? I was just checking up on a little milkweed with eggs that got trampled, I put it in a mason jar of water and set in the milkweed patch, there's a wee Monarch caterpillar on it! Bliss! xomo <3

Gershon Wolf July 11, 2018 at 1:30 AM You've inspired me more than you know! :) gw Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 11, 2018 at 7:45 AM Happy Mo <3

Demetrios Trifiatis July 10, 2018 at 10:45 AM How delightful those flying flowers are carrying with them our dreams dearest, Maureen! Superb! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 11, 2018 at 7:47 AM Lovely said, and true my dear! My wild garden played host to fireflies last night! :)) xomo!

Roy Pett July 10, 2018 at 8:04 AM Excellent Maureen, nature has a knack of bringing beauty and happiness into our lives as you do with your lovely poems, an absolute joy to read. :)) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 10, 2018 at 8:25 AM Thank you Roy, your sweetness is treasured :) xomo!

Silent One July 9, 2018 at 4:28 PM Nice one Mo.. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 10, 2018 at 8:27 AM More of an exclamation than a poem ;) xomo!

Arthur Vaso July 9, 2018 at 1:42 AM so sweet :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:24 AM My milkweed garden at long last bearing fruit ;D

Lyric Man July 8, 2018 at 9:38 PM That was like a little dessert.. lovely and delicious! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:25 AM Enchanté ;)

Mick Talbot July 8, 2018 at 7:06 PM Yay, it would be nice if you get to see where they pupate and watch the imagos emerge. Its the summer brood that does the return trip to Mexico. Loved your wiggly instar! Mick Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:27 AM Giggles ;) thank you! I saw lots of egg laying, if I get to see one I'll be elated! All I can do is tend my milkweeds, keep them watered and hope! xomo

Anil Deo July 8, 2018 at 3:21 PM Masterful! (Ran out of feminine ways of saying Kudos for your amazing Picture) Is it Misterful, or Mistressfully written? That may botch wordsmithery. shalom shalom dear Maureen (my Sis in Africa has your name) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:30 AM Thank you so much Anil! Just having some fun, am over the moon with my Monarch project success. Not a lot of Maureens out there ;)

Line Gauthier July 8, 2018 at 2:48 PM What a lovely line and what a delivery with impact. Superbly done, Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:33 AM Thank you! <3 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:32 AM I just HAD TO SHARE! I never use all caps, it's yelling to me, but this I had to shout ;p xomo!

Becca Teagan July 8, 2018 at 2:21 PM So cute! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:34 AM Tee hee! Thankya! SO exciting ;)

Robertina B. July 8, 2018 at 11:58 AM "A lovely rhyme, Maureen.. I really love butterflies.. Warmest wishes to you! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2018 at 6:36 AM Thank you Roberta! Been encouraging my milkweeds for a few years hoping to attract the endangered Monarchs, have had hardly any until this year, and laying females to boot! (or one that keeps coming back;) xomo