Wish Upon a Star

unasleep in my bed I think of you 
and wonder where you are 
amist the twinkling stars of hue 
a lovers wish upon a star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 20, 2019 at 10:02 AM
i am not good at rhyme so much but your poem ignited my muse...in the hush of awakened night/ i see the trails of crimson light/ gather brilliant memories tight/ and envision you within sight/ ...i think we have all been there a time or two...beautiful penning...hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Magically written, Pixie. Lovely! :) gw
Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 10:05 PM
A poem of such poetic tenderness and longing, Pixie. A lovely gem! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Love 'unasleep' and 'stars of hue' - so tender and wistful..
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August 16, 2019 at 9:20 PM
So lovely and romantic!
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