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Wish Upon a Star

unasleep in my bed I think of you and wonder where you are amist the twinkling stars of hue a lovers wish upon a star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/20/2019 10:02:00 AM
i am not good at rhyme so much but your poem ignited my muse...in the hush of awakened night/ i see the trails of crimson light/ gather brilliant memories tight/ and envision you within sight/ ...i think we have all been there a time or two...beautiful penning...hugs :)
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Date: 8/18/2019 10:25:00 AM
Magically written, Pixie. Lovely! :) gw
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Date: 8/17/2019 10:05:00 PM
A poem of such poetic tenderness and longing, Pixie. A lovely gem! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/17/2019 3:08:00 PM
Love 'unasleep' and 'stars of hue' - so tender and wistful..
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Date: 8/16/2019 9:20:00 PM
So lovely and romantic!
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