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Wish Upon a Dandelion Wisp

my thoughts adrift endless on the horizon's edge lingering in the warmth of this day you stand beneath the folds of eyes awake in dreams i tremble amidst the effortless breath of wind tenderly stroking me with the torridity of a midday sigh wiping dry the mist that falls from lonely eyes my tears alight on the feathery puffs of the last dandelion i whisper softly lips against its folds with a kiss it drifts alone

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Date: 10/2/2019 6:58:00 AM
A wisp of a whisper floating gently to our eyes. There is a softness to your words that flows over me as I read this wonderful poem. It drifts effortlessly upon the gentle morning breeze. Beautifully done my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend, i was enjoying nature yesterday, although i had to work i still got to enjoy it...wasn't totally happy with the way this one turned out.... hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2019 7:14:00 PM
Sandra, you captured my imagination and my heart with the breathtaking beauty and emotion of your exquisite, tender and delicately expressed poem. Superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan for your lovely comment and visit...today was a beautiful day...when you have much beauty around you it's easy to find inspiration! hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2019 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful of course my friend!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you...it was a gorgeous day... :)

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