Wish Upon a Dandelion Wisp

my thoughts adrift
endless on the horizon's edge
lingering in the warmth
of this day

you stand beneath
the folds of eyes
awake in dreams

i tremble amidst
the effortless breath of wind
tenderly stroking me
with the torridity
of a  midday sigh

wiping dry
the mist that falls
from lonely eyes

my tears alight
on the feathery puffs
of the last dandelion 

i whisper softly
lips against its folds
with a kiss
it drifts
alone

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Date: 10/2/2019 6:58:00 AM
A wisp of a whisper floating gently to our eyes. There is a softness to your words that flows over me as I read this wonderful poem. It drifts effortlessly upon the gentle morning breeze. Beautifully done my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend, i was enjoying nature yesterday, although i had to work i still got to enjoy it...wasn't totally happy with the way this one turned out.... hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2019 7:14:00 PM
Sandra, you captured my imagination and my heart with the breathtaking beauty and emotion of your exquisite, tender and delicately expressed poem. Superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan for your lovely comment and visit...today was a beautiful day...when you have much beauty around you it's easy to find inspiration! hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2019 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful of course my friend!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you...it was a gorgeous day... :)
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