Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

In the desolate desert of my forlorn life, I wander across the desiccating dunes you make. Enticed by your impulsive mindscape, I saunter in the sandstorm of the dismal time. My longing languishes to lie in the sensuous shade of the oasis of your love, sheltered from the abandoning squall, away from the dreary bleakness of the wasteland. The yearning lost in the debris of the broken heart, I amble sullen with the silent sense of sorrow. My emotions swirl like the dislodged sands in the tide of remote time when you were mine. The transient flame trajectory of devoured desire furrows in my mind a blazing trail of craving, I wish I could tread the track of the shooting star, even if it fades away like the flicker of your love. Sleeping at the desolate edge of the lonely night, I see you shine as a star in my dream sky, sparkles for a while and disappear forever, I feel disheartened, I haven’t dreamt enough. I drift now across the dire topography of denial, the sun of desertion has smoldered my desire, Realizing mirage designs delusion with sands of time, I wish somebody would’ve told me. ________________ March 8, 2023 Title chosen : Wish Somebody Would've Told Me Contest : Pick-A-Title, Vol. 35 Sponsored by : Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/26/2023 8:20:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, Subimal:-) It would've been a top winner had you included "I" in the title. Loved your poem!
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Date: 3/23/2023 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing....................
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