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Wish I'D Brought Along a Cushion

Here I am sitting way up here not very comfy on my behind wish I'd brought along a cushion nice and soft any colour or kind You see I've always liked trains but never really got real close up so thought this can't get any closer now what would be nice! coffee cup! Wonder when the next one's due no notice board around to see well it's nice day to wait around lovely colours there on the trees Think this track will hold me? well all the years trains it's held funny what you think when left alone many thoughts makes mind excelled This seat is really getting sore wish I could see that old puff puff this would really make my day if not then I'll just go off in huff! ( imagining sitting next to railway track waiting on train to come along)

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Date: 8/27/2016 8:18:00 PM
A very nice poem, Gordon, with just a light touch of humor... I have never taken a ride on a train. I hope to travel down those tracks one day :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/27/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Kelly, glad you liked it. Amazing that you've never been on a train, I'm sure you'll love it as US has such a history of great trains. Blessings Gordon
Date: 8/27/2016 4:50:00 AM
Very enjoyable ... 'lovely colours there on the trees' linger in thoughts ...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/27/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Probir, glad you enjoyed it!

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