Wish

. Wish
I'd like to come to you
But, our streets are red
And I do not have
But my white dress

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Skat A

May 27, 2015 at 4:15 AM

Sweet poem

Faleeha Hassan

December 7, 2012 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Mr (Richard Lamoureux) I hope you like my poem

Richard Lamoureux

December 6, 2012 at 1:24 PM

sad and pretty at the same time.

Faleeha Hassan

December 6, 2012 at 5:13 PM

I hope to like it Mr (Richard Lamoureux) Thank you

Faleeha Hassan

December 4, 2012 at 11:18 AM

Dear wonderful (Joan Marie Peranteau) Thank you and your heart White

Faleeha Hassan

December 4, 2012 at 11:14 AM

Thank you and I'm happy in these words my dear(daver austin)

Joanmarie Peranteau

December 4, 2012 at 5:37 AM

Hello Faleeha my dear friend, Congradulations on your poem being featured on the soup home page. I agree with the others who commented on this poem, though short in words it speaks volumes.

Joanmarie Peranteau

December 4, 2012 at 5:39 AM

I meant to say: though few in words, it speaks volumes. Touches my heart.