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. Wish I'd like to come to you But, our streets are red And I do not have But my white dress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/27/2015 4:15:00 AM
Sweet poem
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Date: 12/7/2012 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Mr (Richard Lamoureux) I hope you like my poem
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Date: 12/6/2012 1:24:00 PM
sad and pretty at the same time.
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Faleeha Hassan
Date: 12/6/2012 5:13:00 PM
I hope to like it Mr (Richard Lamoureux) Thank you
Date: 12/4/2012 11:18:00 AM
Dear wonderful (Joan Marie Peranteau) Thank you and your heart White
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Date: 12/4/2012 11:14:00 AM
Thank you and I'm happy in these words my dear(daver austin)
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Date: 12/4/2012 5:37:00 AM
Hello Faleeha my dear friend, Congradulations on your poem being featured on the soup home page. I agree with the others who commented on this poem, though short in words it speaks volumes.
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JoanMarie Peranteau
Date: 12/4/2012 5:39:00 AM
I meant to say: though few in words, it speaks volumes. Touches my heart.
Date: 12/3/2012 9:36:00 AM
Such a wealth of expression in so few lines. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/2/2012 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, and I hope for your website constant development
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:54:00 PM
Faleeha Hassan ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
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Faleeha Hassan
Date: 12/6/2012 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, I am very happy now
Date: 11/22/2012 9:44:00 AM
Oh this is so sad, and so evocative, in so few words. Well done Faleeha x
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Faleeha Hassan
Date: 12/2/2012 8:13:00 PM
Thank you I hope to communicate with you Ms. Kaye Locke