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Wish

Wish you lose all teeth.
One tooth let remain with you
To feel that tooth pain.

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Poet Destroyer A

November 11, 2012 at 11:11 AM

Larisa, wow... now that is wishing for hope..LOL... love your haiku... thank you for the smile.. Or should I say the well deserved missing tooth image... pd

Terry O'Leary

November 11, 2012 at 5:33 AM

Yep... no pain, no gain... Terry (Nice Haiku)

Larisa Rzhepishevska

November 11, 2012 at 7:19 AM

Thank you, dear Terry. Your comment means a lot for me. As far as you know English is a foreign language for me, but I love it so much and though I write poems in English I am still sometimes confused as I don't know if my grammar was correct. So, here is the question: for me or to me? With love and warmest wishes, Larisa