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Just before release You looked up at the sky The world turned pitch black Even with the sun shining down your back Eyes trembled And palms sweat Time stopped Never to be resumed again You wish and wish to turn it back But suddenly dizziness pulls you out You realize with a broken heart The world never stops for anyone So you do the only thing you can You drop to your knees And let the dreadful scream out

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Date: 11/28/2022 5:38:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. God bless you.
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Date: 11/27/2022 8:41:00 PM
Picture perfect! Warmest congratulations on your win, Betsy.
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