Wise Wishes

As I sat on a sunny beach
A tiny bottle bobbed in reach.

I rubbed it jusy to wipe it clean
And from it came a fairy queen.

"What is your wish, if I may ask?
Granting three wishes is my task."

Dumfounded by surprise of it,
I asked if I might think a bit.

"Please state your case without delay
Or I and the wishes go away."

Hurrying then at her command
I asked for love throughout the land.

If everyone would love his neighbor
We could put away the gun and sabre.

Then thinking fast, I asked for joy
For man and woman, girl and boy.

If there is joy in every heart,
Big woes and sorrows have no part.

One wish left that I must not waste
I wished there wasn't need for haste.

I did not mean that for my wish.
The spell was over with a swish .

And so my last grand wish was gone
My fairy queen had scurried on.

Though now it is a wish too late,
I'd wish that we could banish hate.

Joy and love cannot survive,
While ugly hate is still alive.




Catie's contest  three wishes  took 4th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 8/4/2010 7:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Joyce in Catie Lindsey's contest "I Dream of Jeanie". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning wise wishes in Catie's contest .. super poem and super win for u my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:11:00 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful poem
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Date: 7/29/2010 7:27:00 AM
well written , good rhyme and a joy to read, have you noticed how ugly the word "ugly" is! much love carolann
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:48:00 PM
well, Joyce. I think maybe your second wish would have taken care of the third one. REal joy would do away with anyone having the need to feel hate. Good little poem. LUv, Andrea (now do I try this? Or just re-enter my poem from that other wishing contest a long time ago? I get so lazy!)
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Date: 7/28/2010 4:32:00 PM
A unique way to choose wishes . Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/28/2010 11:00:00 AM
good luck in the contest with this great poem
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Date: 7/28/2010 10:43:00 AM
enjoyed your wise wishes, have a good one,..p.d.
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