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Wise Up

Embrace your spouse;
Don't give louse room
To browse your home.

butterflyflowerhomelovethan-bauk

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Debbie Guzzi

May 10, 2013 at 6:15 PM

Congrad's on your writing winning. Light & Love

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

May 10, 2013 at 3:50 PM

Fine poetry, congrats, friend!!

Connie Gildersleeve

May 10, 2013 at 3:02 PM

Congratulations on your win. Connie

Goodness Lanre

May 10, 2013 at 1:56 PM

Congrats on your win

Joseph May

May 10, 2013 at 10:05 AM

congrats on your win A.O

Skat A

May 9, 2013 at 11:02 PM

A O., thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~

Timothy Hicks

April 24, 2013 at 9:32 AM

I agree with Caleb. I've tried writing Than-Bauk and it's very challenging to write one that doesn't feel "forced". This one didn't feel like that at all, but felt natural. Very strong emotions!