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Embrace your spouse; Don't give louse room To browse your home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/10/2013 6:15:00 PM
Congrad's on your writing winning. Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2013 3:50:00 PM
Fine poetry, congrats, friend!!
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Date: 5/10/2013 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Connie
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/10/2013 10:05:00 AM
congrats on your win A.O
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:02:00 PM
A O., thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2013 9:32:00 AM
I agree with Caleb. I've tried writing Than-Bauk and it's very challenging to write one that doesn't feel "forced". This one didn't feel like that at all, but felt natural. Very strong emotions!
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Date: 4/11/2013 7:42:00 AM
Im very impressed with this one. A than bauk may seem easy, but it ISN'T!
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