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Wise Owl

A Poem By My 9 Year Old Grandson Connor Smith

     As dawn awakens,
     he does not

     He is the too early bird.

     You hear but do not see,
     the shadowed greatness.

     With a birds eye view of life,
     he is the wise owl...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 3:56 PM
wow, keep him writing. VERY good!!
Deschler Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:31 PM
I love owls! They are my favorite animal and any poem about them always gets my full attention... I enjoyed this one so much! Well done, Connor!
Eastman Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Awwww... A very great Poet is awakening... Loved it.
Ashe Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Connor, keep writing until all of life runs out of ink! Write On young Sir, Write On!
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Wonderful work Connor, you've made PaPa proud. Keep the magic alive by continuing to write. All my love...
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Connor, you have poetry in your blood lad! Well done young man! Such an honor to read this!!!
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Why thank you Arthur Vaso! :)
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