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Wisdom of the Sword

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The idea here is to compare swords and other bladed weapons to how we humans grow up in life showing how great one becomes.

Originally born as knives short of length long journey ahead age comes by out of the chrysalis come katanas with sharper and longer blades bigger handle stronger steel and guard along with elegance shown in its true form and nobility as glorious as a king

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Date: 11/26/2022 9:29:00 PM
superbly written; I enjoyed your thought
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Date: 3/7/2018 12:10:00 AM
I'm still a short knife. Well written, Vermillion.
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