Wisdom

Worthy of making decisions and drafting conclusions
Ideas manufactured from careful observation and scrutiny from a 
Sound mind soaked in constant learning and
Dipped in the dense sea of understanding
Only the unwise settle for just any result, because
Matured thinking and calculative views give an excellent product
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dillenbeck Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 4:31 PM
Found it, finally. This is as good as I had hoped, given your IGNORANCE. Couple thoughts. Buckminster Fuller discusses the difference in depth between understanding as compared to deeper "comprehension". What about, "Worthy of building choices before drafting conclusions"? Under Ideas, I like regenerated more than manufactured because it feels more organic and life-giving. Love "Sound mind soaked in constant learning" although I might have gone for solid rather than constant, for alliteration.
Kiser Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:08 AM
I do love the, "dip", in the "sea of understanding". Well said.
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so much Kiser
C. Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 5:14 PM
WOW!! This says it all, this should be in the contest. I also agree with what Nino has said. This is indeed a 7. I so totally enjoyed.
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so much Theresa
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