Wisdom

Should I slice it length ways or width-ways Which way will be the best To give each one a half So from their arms the child wrest They claim they are the mother But each one cannot be I wish I had the given by god knowledge To make the decision that needs to be Solomon must have prayed for The wisdom needed back then To give the child to the rightful mother And not the spiteful hurting harridan How he knew just what to Was inspired of god He knew the real mother would acquiesce When confronted with the cutting job How I wish to be like just like him To make decisions and see the sense But not only that I’d like The wisdom to know the difference.
Mandy Tams:entry into the Serenity Response Competition "Wisdom to know the difference"
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Esquire Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:48 PM
My Dear Sister Mandy, YOU certainly picked the best Wisdom story of the Bible. Congratulations on YOUR Win in SweetHeart's contest. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Brother...Harry
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October 13, 2012 at 2:39 PM
i've always liked that story Mandy, reading this is like hiting the nail on the head, you have structured this poem so well, love the last stanza, reminds me of me, with the decision to stay or go, but not before i've read every poem you have written....
Macfarlane Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Great write Mandy...congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:44 AM
Thank you for the time to read and comment x
Sweetheart Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 5:09 PM
congrats Mandy on a superb win for this wonderful write luv..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:44 AM
Thanks sorry I'm late with it x
Haick Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Mandy. Very well-written! Love, Annalise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 2:45 AM
Thank you Annalise x
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 5:21 AM
Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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January 30, 2012 at 2:45 AM
Thanks Carol x
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January 26, 2012 at 4:37 AM
Wonderful one loved and enjoyed. Congratulation on your win, bl
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January 30, 2012 at 2:45 AM
Thanks Bl x
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Very well written Mandy.oxox love Anne-Lise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise hugs and kisses to you x
J.T. Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Good write and good luck in the poetry contest.- JH
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Thanks JH x
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:59 PM
this is one of the best stories in the bible for a judge to have to read, to know how to use wisdom as Solomon did. Good topic you wrote on, Mandy!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Thanks Andrea x
Williams Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Mandy very profound, good luck and enjoy your hol,..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Thanks to both points David hope the sun shines a bit x
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