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Wisdom

Should I slice it length ways or width-ways Which way will be the best To give each one a half So from their arms the child wrest They claim they are the mother But each one cannot be I wish I had the given by god knowledge To make the decision that needs to be Solomon must have prayed for The wisdom needed back then To give the child to the rightful mother And not the spiteful hurting harridan How he knew just what to Was inspired of god He knew the real mother would acquiesce When confronted with the cutting job How I wish to be like just like him To make decisions and see the sense But not only that I’d like The wisdom to know the difference.
Mandy Tams:entry into the Serenity Response Competition "Wisdom to know the difference"

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Date: 3/17/2013 7:48:00 PM
My Dear Sister Mandy, YOU certainly picked the best Wisdom story of the Bible. Congratulations on YOUR Win in SweetHeart's contest. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Brother...Harry
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Date: 10/13/2012 2:39:00 PM
i've always liked that story Mandy, reading this is like hiting the nail on the head, you have structured this poem so well, love the last stanza, reminds me of me, with the decision to stay or go, but not before i've read every poem you have written....
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:36:00 PM
Great write Mandy...congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:44:00 AM
Thank you for the time to read and comment x
Date: 1/27/2012 5:09:00 PM
congrats Mandy on a superb win for this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:44:00 AM
Thanks sorry I'm late with it x
Date: 1/26/2012 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Mandy. Very well-written! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:45:00 AM
Thank you Annalise x
Date: 1/26/2012 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:45:00 AM
Thanks Carol x
Date: 1/26/2012 4:37:00 AM
Wonderful one loved and enjoyed. Congratulation on your win, bl
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:45:00 AM
Thanks Bl x
Date: 1/18/2012 5:31:00 AM
Very well written Mandy.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/18/2012 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise hugs and kisses to you x
Date: 1/17/2012 8:19:00 PM
Good write and good luck in the poetry contest.- JH
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:33:00 AM
Thanks JH x
Date: 1/17/2012 7:59:00 PM
this is one of the best stories in the bible for a judge to have to read, to know how to use wisdom as Solomon did. Good topic you wrote on, Mandy!
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:33:00 AM
Thanks Andrea x
Date: 1/17/2012 7:36:00 AM
Mandy very profound, good luck and enjoy your hol,..David
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:34:00 AM
Thanks to both points David hope the sun shines a bit x

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