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While wondrous willows weep, wild whistling winds whirl wickedly Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 8/31/2022

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/18/2021 2:19:00 PM

Superb alliteration in your piece that also calls to mind stark images. Very well penned. Brian

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/23/2020 5:41:00 PM

Glad you kept the four letter 'S word' (Snow) out of this one! ~ Hayward & Spooner Lumberjack

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2020 6:14:00 AM

A brilliant alliteration my dear friend - weather is unpredictable and can change from calm to fury - you describe in a few words how 'wild whistling winds whirl wickedly' these few words give one a sense of apprehension! Wonderful and clever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2020 3:01:00 AM

Great alliteration my friend..

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2020 7:31:00 PM

Ohhh.. dear Charlie, your chilly wintry imagery gives me wind chill goose bumps! A vivid and vibrant alliteration spills easily from your poetic pen, my wonderful friend. warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2020 6:58:00 PM

Great! Weather can be vicious. At the library have to deliver curbside and now it’s cold and dark...oh no! I have to go through my closet now to see what to wear.