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Wired Wrong

Head hurts horrendously
Thundered thoughts throb
Manic mind melts
Bizarre brainwaves beckoning 
Whatever wanders wayward
Furiously fueling falsehoods
Deepening demented delusions


Alliteration contest/Dr.Ram Mehta
7/07/2014
By:Greg Hoffman

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/1/2015 1:56:00 AM

Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Greg!

David Williams

Date: 7/9/2014 5:01:00 PM

Greg good poem for the contest...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2014 4:09:00 PM

I enjoyed this one and how you changed the alliteration in each line!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/9/2014 1:40:00 AM

This is a strongly expressed write, Greg. Alliteration sounds great, but I am sure it is not as easy as it looks. I'm still working on mine. // paul