Greg Hoffman Poet Alliteration

Wired Wrong

Head hurts horrendously
Thundered thoughts throb
Manic mind melts
Bizarre brainwaves beckoning 
Whatever wanders wayward
Furiously fueling falsehoods
Deepening demented delusions


Alliteration contest/Dr.Ram Mehta
7/07/2014
By:Greg Hoffman

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 1, 2015 at 1:56 AM Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Greg!

David Williams July 9, 2014 at 5:01 PM Greg good poem for the contest...David

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2014 at 4:09 PM I enjoyed this one and how you changed the alliteration in each line!

Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 1:40 AM This is a strongly expressed write, Greg. Alliteration sounds great, but I am sure it is not as easy as it looks. I'm still working on mine. // paul