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Wintery Light

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frost chills on air twilight eve of starlight groves lost in moonbeams glow

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 4/27/2020 8:17:00 PM

Get 5 syllables in line one of your haiku for consistency.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/28/2020 5:56:00 PM

Originally I had what I thought was five syllables, but I couldn't get a consensus with the different syllable counters. So I went with the one from Poetry Soup and reduced the count to match their counter. If you know of a reliable counter, please let me know. And I thank you for your comment.

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 4/24/2020 9:15:00 AM

well done the words depict the scene

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/28/2020 5:57:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I only hope that you had a chance to come back and see the comanion video I did.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2020 8:52:00 AM

Lovely and what a great piece of art. The two enhance each other.

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/19/2020 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Richard, I have recently discovered the photo process on P.S. and have gotten the courage to try it. Your comments are a Blessing my friend

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/19/2020 8:07:00 AM

Hi JC, I love this atmospheric Haiku. A nuanced and lyrical work. Howard

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/19/2020 11:59:00 AM

Thank you, Howard, for this is the closest I could find for a photo that captured that magical aura that winter can sometimes have in the evening. I really appreciate the beautiful comment. It means a lot to me.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/16/2020 12:50:00 AM

I love your imagery in this beautiful Haiku. Each line is a beauty. Thanks for visiting my poems I really appreciate it....Maria Hugs

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/17/2020 5:57:00 PM

Maria, it is wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for this beautiful comment. I enjoy your poetry and artistic flair. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2020 4:56:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, JC...worthy of being transferred on to a postcard. Regards // paul

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/14/2020 3:30:00 PM

I could see it as a postcard now that you mention it. Thank you, Paul, for taking the time to read my poem and for these Beautiful words my friend. Stay safe. JC Hawkens.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/13/2020 6:47:00 AM

I like that image. Kind wishes, Kai

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/14/2020 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Kai, for the wonderful comment. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/9/2020 4:02:00 PM

Wonderfully written :)

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 3:26:00 PM

J.W. Earnings, thank you for the kind words my friend. Stay safe JC Hawkens.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/31/2020 6:35:00 PM

So evocative of a ghostly winter eve, beautiful-

Jc Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 3:25:00 PM

Michelle, Thank you for the wonderful description. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave such a wonderful comment. Much appreciatied. Stay safe JC Hawkens