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frost chills on air twilight eve of starlight groves lost in moonbeams glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/27/2020 8:17:00 PM
Get 5 syllables in line one of your haiku for consistency.
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Date: 4/28/2020 5:56:00 PM
Originally I had what I thought was five syllables, but I couldn't get a consensus with the different syllable counters. So I went with the one from Poetry Soup and reduced the count to match their counter. If you know of a reliable counter, please let me know. And I thank you for your comment.
Date: 4/24/2020 9:15:00 AM
well done the words depict the scene
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Date: 4/28/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I only hope that you had a chance to come back and see the comanion video I did.
Date: 4/19/2020 8:52:00 AM
Lovely and what a great piece of art. The two enhance each other.
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Date: 4/19/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, I have recently discovered the photo process on P.S. and have gotten the courage to try it. Your comments are a Blessing my friend
Date: 4/19/2020 8:07:00 AM
Hi JC, I love this atmospheric Haiku. A nuanced and lyrical work. Howard
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Date: 4/19/2020 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Howard, for this is the closest I could find for a photo that captured that magical aura that winter can sometimes have in the evening. I really appreciate the beautiful comment. It means a lot to me.
Date: 4/16/2020 12:50:00 AM
I love your imagery in this beautiful Haiku. Each line is a beauty. Thanks for visiting my poems I really appreciate it....Maria Hugs
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Date: 4/17/2020 5:57:00 PM
Maria, it is wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for this beautiful comment. I enjoy your poetry and artistic flair. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/13/2020 4:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, JC...worthy of being transferred on to a postcard. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/14/2020 3:30:00 PM
I could see it as a postcard now that you mention it. Thank you, Paul, for taking the time to read my poem and for these Beautiful words my friend. Stay safe. JC Hawkens.
Date: 4/13/2020 6:47:00 AM
I like that image. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/14/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kai, for the wonderful comment. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/9/2020 4:02:00 PM
Wonderfully written :)
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Date: 4/11/2020 3:26:00 PM
J.W. Earnings, thank you for the kind words my friend. Stay safe JC Hawkens.
Date: 3/31/2020 6:35:00 PM
So evocative of a ghostly winter eve, beautiful-
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Date: 4/11/2020 3:25:00 PM
Michelle, Thank you for the wonderful description. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave such a wonderful comment. Much appreciatied. Stay safe JC Hawkens
Date: 3/29/2020 1:52:00 PM
lots of beautiful "sound" with the images, JC
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I hope all is well with you. Stay safe.
Date: 3/28/2020 4:40:00 PM
super imagery JC:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:43:00 PM
As always, thank you for the wonderful comment. Stay safe.
Date: 1/5/2020 11:32:00 AM
Lovely, JC.
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Line, for the kind words.
Date: 12/31/2019 11:32:00 PM
Sounds like a beautiful evening :) Enjoyed reading JC
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/31/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for the kind comment.
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Date: 12/29/2019 7:04:00 AM
Great imagery..
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Date: 3/29/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. Stay safe