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Wintery Light

frost chills on air
twilight eve of starlight groves
lost in moonbeams glow

naturenightstarswinterhaiku

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J Hamilton Gist

April 27, 2020 at 8:17 PM

Get 5 syllables in line one of your haiku for consistency.

Jc Hawkens

April 28, 2020 at 5:56 PM

Originally I had what I thought was five syllables, but I couldn't get a consensus with the different syllable counters. So I went with the one from Poetry Soup and reduced the count to match their counter. If you know of a reliable counter, please let me know. And I thank you for your comment.

Joan C. Fingon

April 24, 2020 at 9:15 AM

well done the words depict the scene

Jc Hawkens

April 28, 2020 at 5:57 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I only hope that you had a chance to come back and see the comanion video I did.

Richard Lamoureux

April 19, 2020 at 8:52 AM

Lovely and what a great piece of art. The two enhance each other.

Jc Hawkens

April 19, 2020 at 12:03 PM

Thank you, Richard, I have recently discovered the photo process on P.S. and have gotten the courage to try it. Your comments are a Blessing my friend

Howard Kerr

April 19, 2020 at 8:07 AM

Hi JC, I love this atmospheric Haiku. A nuanced and lyrical work. Howard

Jc Hawkens

April 19, 2020 at 11:59 AM

Thank you, Howard, for this is the closest I could find for a photo that captured that magical aura that winter can sometimes have in the evening. I really appreciate the beautiful comment. It means a lot to me.

Maria Williams

April 16, 2020 at 12:50 AM

I love your imagery in this beautiful Haiku. Each line is a beauty. Thanks for visiting my poems I really appreciate it....Maria Hugs

Jc Hawkens

April 17, 2020 at 5:57 PM

Maria, it is wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for this beautiful comment. I enjoy your poetry and artistic flair. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

Paul Callus

April 13, 2020 at 4:56 PM

Beautiful imagery, JC...worthy of being transferred on to a postcard. Regards // paul

Jc Hawkens

April 14, 2020 at 3:30 PM

I could see it as a postcard now that you mention it. Thank you, Paul, for taking the time to read my poem and for these Beautiful words my friend. Stay safe. JC Hawkens.

Kai Michael Neumann

April 13, 2020 at 6:47 AM

I like that image. Kind wishes, Kai

Jc Hawkens

April 14, 2020 at 3:27 PM

Thank you, Kai, for the wonderful comment. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens

David William Breidenthal

April 9, 2020 at 4:02 PM

Wonderfully written :)

Jc Hawkens

April 11, 2020 at 3:26 PM

J.W. Earnings, thank you for the kind words my friend. Stay safe JC Hawkens.

Michelle Faulkner

March 31, 2020 at 6:35 PM

So evocative of a ghostly winter eve, beautiful-

Jc Hawkens

April 11, 2020 at 3:25 PM

Michelle, Thank you for the wonderful description. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave such a wonderful comment. Much appreciatied. Stay safe JC Hawkens