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Wintertime

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Wintertime, and the snow is now falling. Trees are bare, and the wind blows through them Holes in the cabin, and we feel like its freezing. Dad must bring some good warmth to all of us. Drag in some thick logs, and the fireplace is ready. Then, we’ll surely find plenty warm woollen clothes. Look, sweet child, the lake is all thick and icy. Let's go skating and we'll enjoy all this day. (NB Whether I succeeded or not I leave this to your judgement. I tried to write a poem on wintertime using the famous song Summertime. I apologized if I failed.)

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2021 7:42:00 AM

Another beautiful poem with lovely imagery ; I enjoyed reading. I hope you are doing well my friend. Hugs Eve

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/1/2021 5:37:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor - Dads always come to the rescue. This is lovely with a great description of the moment and time of winter. I found your first stanza to be truly poetic with expression. Thank you as always for sharing. Have a wonderful day.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/31/2021 11:00:00 PM

Hi Victor, You didn't fail; you penned some good lyrics. I had to go listen to Summertime again, and I concluded that your efforts worked well, my friend. Well done;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/31/2021 11:11:00 AM

I think your effort worked extremely well, Victor, and the result is breathtaking! The video was also pure delight. :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/30/2021 10:20:00 PM

This is a wonderful one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2021 1:22:00 PM

Yes, I can see it. Once I saw what you said at the bottom, I sang it in my head with your words. very nice.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2021 1:05:00 PM

Hello Victor i think that you did a great write on this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/30/2021 9:21:00 AM

Lovely Victor, I read your poem whilst listening to the song and you did it, you succeeded… Belle

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/30/2021 9:10:00 AM

Ah, you did not fail, for sure, Victor. I read your poem through tears while listening to the beautiful singing. Thank you, thank you! Well done, my friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/30/2021 7:18:00 AM

Superb write Victor, you never failed and thanks for that video and that soft voice. Well done

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2021 6:30:00 AM

you nailed it with the imagery for me Víctor and the summertime song is one of my faves too:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/30/2021 5:10:00 AM

Victor, wonderful winter imagery!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you for the video, Victor--what a joy to listen to the songs! Good job capturing the essence of wintertime--spending time with loved ones is always a source of glee no matter the season.