Victor Buhagiar Poet Lyric

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Wintertime

Wintertime, and the snow is now falling.
Trees are bare, and the wind blows through them
Holes in the cabin, and we feel like its freezing.
Dad must bring some good warmth to all of us.

Drag in some thick logs, and the fireplace is ready.
Then, we’ll surely find plenty warm woollen clothes.
Look, sweet child, the lake is all thick and icy.
Let's go skating and we'll enjoy all this day.


(NB  Whether I succeeded or not I leave this to your judgement.  I tried to write a poem on wintertime using the famous song Summertime.  I apologized if I failed.)

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Eve Roper June 1, 2021 at 7:42 AM Another beautiful poem with lovely imagery ; I enjoyed reading. I hope you are doing well my friend. Hugs Eve

Lisa Ricci June 1, 2021 at 5:37 AM Good Afternoon Victor - Dads always come to the rescue. This is lovely with a great description of the moment and time of winter. I found your first stanza to be truly poetic with expression. Thank you as always for sharing. Have a wonderful day.

Alexis Y. May 31, 2021 at 11:00 PM Hi Victor, You didn't fail; you penned some good lyrics. I had to go listen to Summertime again, and I concluded that your efforts worked well, my friend. Well done;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 31, 2021 at 11:11 AM I think your effort worked extremely well, Victor, and the result is breathtaking! The video was also pure delight. :)

Christuraj Alex May 30, 2021 at 10:20 PM This is a wonderful one.

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2021 at 1:22 PM Yes, I can see it. Once I saw what you said at the bottom, I sang it in my head with your words. very nice.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 30, 2021 at 1:05 PM Hello Victor i think that you did a great write on this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.

Beryl Edmonds May 30, 2021 at 9:21 AM Lovely Victor, I read your poem whilst listening to the song and you did it, you succeeded… Belle

L Milton Hankins May 30, 2021 at 9:10 AM Ah, you did not fail, for sure, Victor. I read your poem through tears while listening to the beautiful singing. Thank you, thank you! Well done, my friend!

Sotto Poet May 30, 2021 at 7:18 AM Superb write Victor, you never failed and thanks for that video and that soft voice. Well done

Jan Allison May 30, 2021 at 6:30 AM you nailed it with the imagery for me Víctor and the summertime song is one of my faves too:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin May 30, 2021 at 5:10 AM Victor, wonderful winter imagery!

Vijay Pandit May 30, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you for the video, Victor--what a joy to listen to the songs! Good job capturing the essence of wintertime--spending time with loved ones is always a source of glee no matter the season.

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2021 at 2:26 AM Can picture the winter scene Victor, who sang that song summertime? Tom Tom Cunningham May 30, 2021 at 3:53 AM Lovely song Victor, no you didn't fail, your lyrics fit the tune seamlessly. Tom Victor Buhagiar May 30, 2021 at 2:45 AM You'll find it in Porgy and Bess by Gershwin. I will upload the song I think.

Unseeking Seeker May 30, 2021 at 2:12 AM Can’t say about the song but your poem is superb!

Joanna Daniel May 30, 2021 at 1:12 AM This stands alone in its beauty, Victor, don't know about summertime song though:)