Winter-Spring Canon

Winter-spring canon 
Incensed along Jacob's Creek
Like watery angels thought less from clouds above
Canopies of light make soft their entrance
In clucking-pig-progging-and-a-yip-yip-yipping
A shuft-and-shushing of large glass doors
Round about our ways of going
Slipping on the wet pages of our
Winter-spring canon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 19, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Congrats Matt on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
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July 19, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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June 3, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x3 making it through the first round Matt. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with three poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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April 16, 2010 at 6:46 PM
What an interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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April 13, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Congrats Matt, on your featured write. Vince
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April 12, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Wish you more success in the future. Ernilando
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April 12, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Matt. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sara
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April 12, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congrats Matt on your featured poem on Soup this week... a great choice to feature and share...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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January 26, 2010 at 4:20 PM
Not sure I get the 5th line but I love the "shuft-and-shushing of large glass doors" ... smile ...I hear it ... Thank you so much for including me in your winners circle in the last contest you have ... And, I don't think I have the day/month of your birthday Mr. Caliri ... smile ... don't need the year but it would be nice to include you on my birthday calendar!!
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January 25, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Interesting write that you have written here in this one. I especially like line three. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 25, 2010 at 4:42 AM
I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Matt. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2010 at 11:42 AM
A beautiful write you have here and thank you for the short powerful read. Have a great Sunday. :)
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