Emile Pinet Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Winter's Wrath

Autumn frosts my breath,
forming white contrails
of misty vapors,
that get snatched away
by a feisty breeze.

Color swiftly
diminishes,
as the wind strips
leaves from the trees.

And scarecrows
abandoned
in the fields:

suffer
Winter's

wrath.

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Connie Marcum Wong January 7, 2022 at 3:13 PM You elevated this form to a high level Emile. I loved your imagery in this poem. Congratulations on your win my friend. New year blessings xxoo Emile Pinet January 7, 2022 at 6:16 PM Thanks, Connie, I'm pleased to hear from you again, it's so nice to have you back my friend, you have been missed, Emile.

Sam Kauffman January 7, 2022 at 10:14 AM Hi Emile! Congratulations on your win. Even without the picture every word conveys this image. Sending you blessings for the new year. Emile Pinet January 7, 2022 at 12:02 PM Thanks, Sam, I wish you and yous a Happy New year my friend, Emile.

Craig Bowden January 6, 2022 at 11:40 PM I’ve never heard of this form. It looks like fun to write. Congrats on your win. Emile Pinet January 7, 2022 at 8:20 AM Thanks, Craig, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan December 21, 2021 at 2:43 AM A great entry, Emile. I wish you well. Emile Pinet December 21, 2021 at 7:06 AM Thanks, Jenna, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2021 at 12:50 PM Hello Emile, that scarecrow takes a beating in the farmer's field in winter. covered in snow , then covered with mud or ice from a icy storm. Merry Christmas. My friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2021 at 4:20 PM Hello emile, yes he does look beat up. the birds will not be scarwed of him in that shape. Your friend Darlene Emile Pinet December 20, 2021 at 2:34 PM Thanks, Darlene, yes he looks a little beat up, winter tends to do that to a fellow, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins December 20, 2021 at 8:55 AM A very good one, Emile. I loved the illustration, too. You have such talent, my friend! Emile Pinet December 20, 2021 at 9:31 AM Thanks, Milt, I welcome your words my friend, Emile.