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Winter's Window

Nose pressed against winter’s window - leaves a lasting impression - to remember… Copyright © 2016 By Caryl S. Muzzey Third Place Winner ~ "Monoku or One Line Poem” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Feb. 18, 2016 1/19/16

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Joan C. Fingon

Date: 1/29/2020 11:29:00 AM

This has a great image, very well penned and well deserving win!

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/30/2020 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Joan for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 1/28/2016 12:05:00 PM

Love the nose against glass image...flash backs of youth

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/30/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Ingrid, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:30:00 PM

very nice, Caryl. Congrats for the win.

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/30/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 3:01:00 AM

Oh I like this! Congratulations on your win.

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/30/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Susan for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:36:00 AM

CARLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/26/2016 3:49:00 PM

Thank you SKAT, for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed~ CARYL

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 9:06:00 AM

Perfectly done Caryl! :) Congratulations. -hans

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/26/2016 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Hans, glad you enjoyed~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 9:10:00 PM

Hi Carly,, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/26/2016 3:30:00 PM

Nice of you to comment too, PD~ Caryl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/25/2016 2:24:00 AM

Wow Caryl.. lovely imagery.. no wonder a top place win.. big congrats!!

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/25/2016 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Upma for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 9:03:00 PM

CARLY, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/25/2016 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Linda, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed, will have to check out your latest~ Caryl

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2016 11:04:00 AM

This is so clever, and love the wisdom....

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/20/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Harry for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/19/2016 5:13:00 PM

Very nice...Im not good at this form but working on it. BG

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/20/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by Barbara, glad you liked it. I'm new to this form too but I thought I'd try it~ Caryl

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2016 12:10:00 PM

Something poetic and sweet, but me, I see someone doing that and just think, 'That'll be there forever, unless I clean it - Windex." You just pointed out the lyrical, sentimental side - that nose pressing is like a precious photo, a memory on glass. I really like it - thank you for changing me in a positive way .. ha ... CayCay

Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/20/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you CayCay, I'm glad you liked it. I had those memories a lot when my grandkids were little. Not so much now since they're older. I guess I miss them... Caryl