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Winter's Window

Nose pressed against winter’s window - leaves a lasting impression - to remember…

Copyright © 2016 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Third Place Winner ~ "Monoku or One Line Poem” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A
Feb. 18, 2016

1/19/16

wintermonoku

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Joan C. Fingon

January 29, 2020 at 11:29 AM

This has a great image, very well penned and well deserving win!

Caryl Muzzey

January 30, 2020 at 3:00 PM

Thank you Joan for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Ingrid Showalter Swift

January 28, 2016 at 12:05 PM

Love the nose against glass image...flash backs of youth

Caryl Muzzey

January 30, 2016 at 12:06 PM

Thank you Ingrid, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2016 at 7:30 PM

very nice, Caryl. Congrats for the win.

Caryl Muzzey

January 30, 2016 at 11:56 AM

Thank you Andrea, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Susan Gentry

January 27, 2016 at 3:01 AM

Oh I like this! Congratulations on your win.

Caryl Muzzey

January 30, 2016 at 11:51 AM

Thank you Susan for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:36 AM

CARLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your monoku #2 win. xox ** SKAT **

Caryl Muzzey

January 26, 2016 at 3:49 PM

Thank you SKAT, for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed~ CARYL

Hansteven Selfa

January 26, 2016 at 9:06 AM

Perfectly done Caryl! :) Congratulations. -hans

Caryl Muzzey

January 26, 2016 at 3:45 PM

Thank you Hans, glad you enjoyed~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

January 25, 2016 at 9:10 PM

Hi Carly,, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Caryl Muzzey

January 26, 2016 at 3:30 PM

Nice of you to comment too, PD~ Caryl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 25, 2016 at 2:24 AM

Wow Caryl.. lovely imagery.. no wonder a top place win.. big congrats!!

Caryl Muzzey

January 25, 2016 at 10:47 AM

Thank you Upma for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

January 24, 2016 at 9:03 PM

CARLY, CONGRATS on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "I Can't Sleep" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Caryl Muzzey

January 25, 2016 at 10:20 AM

Thank you Linda, for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed, will have to check out your latest~ Caryl

Harry Horsman

January 20, 2016 at 11:04 AM

This is so clever, and love the wisdom....

Caryl Muzzey

January 20, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thank you Harry for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Barbara Gorelick

January 19, 2016 at 5:13 PM

Very nice...Im not good at this form but working on it. BG

Caryl Muzzey

January 20, 2016 at 10:34 AM

Thank you for stopping by Barbara, glad you liked it. I'm new to this form too but I thought I'd try it~ Caryl

CayCay Godwin

January 19, 2016 at 12:10 PM

Something poetic and sweet, but me, I see someone doing that and just think, 'That'll be there forever, unless I clean it - Windex." You just pointed out the lyrical, sentimental side - that nose pressing is like a precious photo, a memory on glass. I really like it - thank you for changing me in a positive way .. ha ... CayCay

Caryl Muzzey

January 20, 2016 at 10:31 AM

Thank you CayCay, I'm glad you liked it. I had those memories a lot when my grandkids were little. Not so much now since they're older. I guess I miss them... Caryl

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