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Winter's Weathered Hue

The wonder of your smile is always there, just like you gave me on that special day, when first I saw you on my front porch stair- your smile imprinted in my heart to stay. Just as in spring and summer long ago, and then in later years, your smile assured my joy of knowing our love stayed aglow- and now, past autumn years, have still endured. The sparkle of your smile from first-love throes, and blissful wedding day we said 'I do', still lingers in my heart, although now shows a special glaze from winter’s weathered hue. The wonder of your smile- those early years, that glowed with brilliance like untarnished gold- became my treasured prize and now appears with warm patina-sheen as we grow old. Though years have flown and age has had its way- your antique smile now etched with lines anew, and lustered with the wear of each new day brings priceless meaning to my love for you. July 1, 2018 Premiere Contest: For You, Love Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 3/13/2023 2:41:00 AM
Wow... Nice one. Congratulations for your top win.
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Date: 3/12/2023 4:15:00 AM
Love this so. Beautiful. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 2/11/2022 9:43:00 PM
A wonderful look back through the years of your love Sandra. Congratulations on your first place win. I hope you have a very happy Valentine’s Day with your love. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 12:06:00 AM
Sandra, this is so very, very beautiful <3 Congratulations to you on your first-place win with this exquisite poem, and congratulations on your precious forever love <3 Happy Valentine's Day to you and your sweetheart!
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Date: 1/26/2019 12:58:00 AM
This is wonderful! All the sides of love, all the facets of the jewel! Thank You for this! It is a great joy to my heart to see such Love!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2019 5:53:00 PM
Hi, Andrew! Thank you for your visit and very supportive comments! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Date: 1/26/2019 12:32:00 AM
This is just gorgeous Sandra! I loved the journey and your ending is perfect! This beauty is going into my Faves! I loved it! Congratulations on your deserved win Sandra! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thank you again, dear Connie, for your very uplifting comment, congrats, and for Faving my poem! That is so nice of you, and I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/12/2018 3:13:00 PM
an absolute gem to read Sandra, may you continue to enjoy many more seasons together:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan, for your uplifting words. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/12/2018 5:11:00 AM
Sandra I admire the way this couple's relationship grows stronger over time. Your writing style is beautiful. Congratulations on your win! There were many terrific entries, including yours. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/16/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for another inspiring contest, for my nice placement, congrats, and supportive comment. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem which is about my hubby and me...we were married 60 years this past June. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/6/2018 1:40:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/6/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for your visit, congratulations and lovely comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/4/2018 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this absolutely wonderful poem of love. Well done!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/5/2018 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I appreciate your visit and lovely comment very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/4/2018 9:45:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/5/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/4/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congrats Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/5/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, L.J.! Sandra
Date: 7/1/2018 6:33:00 PM
This is a loving, wonderful tribute. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sian! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/1/2018 12:10:00 PM
Simply lovely, Sandra. It was always a dream of mine to find a girl get married and grow old together. i guess it just wasn't my destiny.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for your visit and supportive comment. We are very fortunate indeed compared to so many. Sandra

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