Winter's Warning

winter’s warning
dangerous water dance
black ice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Many congrats Deb on your win. Black Ice is so darned dangerous in the winter. Great Haiku....:)
Calhoun Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 12:51 PM
Hi Deb - Lovely write. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC
Poet Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Congratulations deb on your big win in this contest!---kashinath
Freeman Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations Deb on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations on your win..Slippery stuff..Sara
Omaidin Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 1:22 PM
so concise and descriptive, least syllables I have seen ever. Congrats. Déirdre
Sweetheart Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Congrats Deb on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this brilliant write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Congrats on this very foreboding haiku, Deb :) really like that last line btw---nikko :)
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Yes! I remember this one...it had to be a winner....and it is !! Congratulations, Deb!
Richards Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Deadly black ice.....good job, Deb....one dance I'd rather sit out!!
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