Winters Warm

i am sad
this is bad
but its just a passing fad
tomorrow i will be glad
which is totally rad
i have a dad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 8:52 AM
Your rhyming, is priming, needs a little more timing. Godly bless, Moses Your comments always appreciated!
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 2:20 PM
I'm a Dad too Willow! have daughters 19 & 21....am very involved helping them! fine poem!! and belated welcome to the soup!! jim
Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 1:47 PM
i think what au chu is trying to say is IM JEALOUS :)
Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 11:24 AM
you know this is a joke right?
Chu Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 9:06 AM
willow's gay. you sound happy. I'm glad, which is totally rad. I'm your dad.
Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 7:44 AM
I am glad to see that you are okay! We havent heard from you in such a long while. There has been a void in my life up till now. ~your devoted slave
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