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Winter's Stray

Heavy dream, With Her crushed moment Seen in snow.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2023 1:24:00 PM

Very profound/ I like your imagery here.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/5/2023 2:37:00 AM

Ah those heavy dreams, Can be heavier than any words could ever express or describe! I absolutely loved reading this micro. So much said in few words as always.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/4/2023 3:45:00 PM

I felt the crushing moment...deep words here, Paige. Marvelous. Have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2023 1:48:00 PM

Deep one..

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/4/2023 1:36:00 PM

Nicely composed haiku, Paige. I can perceive the picture you conveyed with the heavy dreams and crushed moments.