Ralph Sergi Poet Dodoitsu

Winters Song

Winters Song
Cold and chilly atmosphere
Grips the earth and Humankind
Now the time has come to cite
Winters Song is here

Winter Dodoitsu Contest
Heather Ober  November 9, 2015
Ralph Sergi

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Ralph Sergi November 23, 2015 at 11:17 AM H Cona: THANKS FOR SHARING WITH ME.

Cona Adams November 23, 2015 at 10:46 AM Winter's song may be cold and chilly, but this one falls soft and sweet. Love it.

Nette Onclaud November 14, 2015 at 11:43 AM engaging me so, ralph.. an absorbing read!..huggs

Ralph Sergi November 14, 2015 at 7:10 AM Hi Harrington: Great Poem! It reminds me of Dylan Thomas' '"Do not go gently into the night". Give it a read. I have a saying, "I'm not aging, I'm evolving."

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2015 at 9:11 PM I enjoyed seeing your winter's song, Ralph. Thanks for visiting me today!

Hannington Mumo November 12, 2015 at 12:03 PM A beautifully crafted winter song. #7! Ralph Sergi November 14, 2015 at 7:22 AM Hi Paul, Thank you for your comment. Someday I'll email you and you can tell me about Malta.

Paul Callus November 12, 2015 at 10:35 AM Winter arrives to a 'cold' and 'chilly' welcome; a lovely Dodoitsu...gl in the contest. // paul

Afolabi Muideen November 11, 2015 at 1:40 AM Wow! This is much cute my friend Ralph. I love how it was constructed and the image it vivid. Excellent.........A.M. Ralph Sergi November 11, 2015 at 7:29 AM Hi Afolabi: Thank you for your comment.