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Winter's Slumber

Winter's Slumber Contest Regina McIntosh Winter's slumber has me in cozy places, warm and comforted I am grateful for the wood fire that burns, many blankets I have So many things to help me get through the bitter cold The wind that howls through the woods and all the piles of snow It is the season to hunker down, giving time to reflect on past events To plan positive things for the days ahead, to process methodically A time to be grateful for new things and old creative talents Still, the sun shines on many cold days, rising with endurance As it creates sparkling stars in the pure, white, snow Showing beauty bypasses the battles of the cold weather I awaken from slumber on these stark, beautiful, days Birds come to the feeder, as I watch the show through frosty windows A colorful picture filled with songs, alert my senses to see and hear It is a time to cherish the shelter of this safe home To appreciate all there is when the world is cold outside A time for rest, a time for relaxation, a time to enhance intuition It is a contrast of kindness and bitterness, calmness and fierceness The power of patience, granted by the bulbs, waiting to bloom in spring 12/26/23

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Date: 12/27/2023 4:02:00 PM
Dear Heidi, I really love your poem on winter! With soft and soothing vocabulary, you have created an enchanting piece! I especially liked the line of watching birds coming to the feeder. Hope you had a great Christmas, Dear Poet!
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Date: 12/27/2023 6:52:00 AM
Birds come to the feeder, as I watch the show through frosty windows A colorful picture filled with songs, alert my senses to see and hear It is a time to cherish the shelter of this safe home--beautiful images dwelling in winter. Words that convey warmth, my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2023 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this feedback. I am grateful for your support, always. Bless you :)
Date: 12/26/2023 5:00:00 PM
beautiful poem, Heidi. You've addressed the positives of winter, the alerting of senses, the contrasts metaphorically seen in nature. Excellent. Have to fav this one, hugs, Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2023 5:27:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I am happy to see your comment. I appreciate the Fave too. Have a nice day. Enjoy :)
Date: 12/26/2023 3:49:00 PM
Hello Heidi, oh such a beautiful poem. I read it twice. It will be my fav. Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/28/2023 11:27:00 AM
Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/26/2023 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene. I am happy to hear that and I appreciate the Fave too :)

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