Billie Jama Poet Haiku

Winter's Silence

                    skeleton trees sway,
                winter gifts them white 
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                                   sleepy hush follows 

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Sara Kendrick April 30, 2025 at 3:58 AM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. so delighted to see your name on the winners' list. Sara K

Lin Lane April 29, 2025 at 4:48 AM I can see the tree appearing as a skeleton, bare branches. Mother Nature took her leaves and then covered her nakedness with a blanket of snow. That took me a lot of words to express what you did in eleven!! Billie Jama April 29, 2025 at 7:39 AM Justin did that is the story. I'd like to challenge myself to write a micro poetry. Th thank you

Ink Empress April 28, 2025 at 2:13 AM So beautiful and creative how youv written your hiku! I have one written too but didnt post yet, i think i should post soon before contest closes however i must highlight the lines “ skeleton trees sway” how vivid and descriptive i can see through your picturesque word weaving, those skeletal wintry trees! And the ending! Best wishes sis! Sending you light always! A fave ofcourse! Billie Jama April 29, 2025 at 7:32 AM The fact sis, ,you always leave the best comments and I can't believe all three of us might this time : )