Kyle Kriticos Poet Rhyme

Winter's Relief

Let winter come 
And freeze the sky 
No more will shadows cast  
Let showers turn to heaps of snow 
With gardens hidden deep 

Let working cease 
Migration fly  
Let herds to safety dash 
Farmers idle, fires glow 
No fields left to reap 

My picket fence
Blockaded high
No perfect cobbled path
Let winter come, and snowstorms blow   
I need some time to sleep  

By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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Paul Arnold February 25, 2017 at 6:40 PM Well written on a season that is my favorite

Dawn Anne Mcintyre October 6, 2011 at 11:03 AM Like this one a lot. We've got 6 months of the winter out here in Calgary - I will tuck these images in my pocket when I brace the winds.

Kash Poet September 24, 2011 at 1:49 PM Very nice!!Enjoyed reading it....

Jack Horne September 9, 2011 at 10:25 AM Beautiful imagery, Kyle

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2011 at 2:44 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Kyle. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 1:15 AM WOWIE, this is amazing. MY FAVE for the night!!!

September 7, 2011 at 10:58 PM Had to chuckle at the last line. You do give the reader something to think about here. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Elizabeth Wesley September 7, 2011 at 10:51 PM A lovely write on winter Kyle, You take the languid approach with resting as the reward. Could feel the effects of that sweet time.