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Winter's Reign

king surrenders crown
sheds cloak of nobility
bows 'neath ice queen's reign



9/26/19
Contest: A Transition of Seasons (Judged 10/7/19)
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

Entered in N-A rerun 4 Poetry Contest

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John Hamilton Date: 12/22/2019 4:09:00 PM I thought I left a comment, but now it's gone, a soup glitch? Congrats HT not a big fan of short writes but this was soo good it could not,not, place! Congrats on a great win! Login to Reply Hello There Date: 12/22/2019 10:38:00 PM Lol. I'm so glad you liked the way this turned out, John. I was leary about submitting it, so I'm especially thrilled you found it worthy of a decent ranking ~ Thank you very much! :) Happy Holidays !!

Brenda Chiri Date: 12/22/2019 3:03:00 PM Congrats yet again on another win!;) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 12/22/2019 10:36:00 PM Thank you so very much for all of your kindness, Brenda! :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/14/2019 9:14:00 AM What a cool tree. That does look like a crown way up there. I hope that I e Queen doesn’t have her way. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/14/2019 1:09:00 PM Lol. She better not!! If this oak takes a literal bow, our house... is gone.

Heidi Sands Date: 9/12/2019 9:24:00 PM This is a great one! Well done :) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/12/2019 10:47:00 PM Thank you very much, Heidi :)

Chris Green Date: 9/10/2019 6:48:00 AM This was perfectly expressed. I love the imagery in your words. One of the best I have seen describing the change of seasons. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/10/2019 8:12:00 AM Chris, I am grateful for your words...Thank you for the positive feedback :)